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Sarah Pass

  • Romantic Novels Re: Leave out all the rest

    I thought this was a very interesting story> I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how you didn't have your main character fall for the boy she thought was cute ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Artist and The Philosopher

    This was an interesting story but there are a few things you should change like in the part when you said that he could still feel eyes on him should ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • General Articles Re: My Story of the hard times with my mom

    Hi,let me first say that I'm so sorry for what you and your family are going through. I just had two nitpicks though. One is I think you put my ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Redemption (Is in a Smile)

    This was a really nice poem. I love the message of it, and the fact that you don't over use the title. It's simple but not overly simple and its ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Pygmalion

    This was so amazing!!! It reminding me of the kind of books my teacher has us read in our classical literature class. I loved that it wasn't your average love ...

    Jul 10, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hot Spots for Writers

    It's funny that you mention Shakespeare's Tavern because we were planning to go there, but then we found out they were playing Hamlet the musical and we didn't really want ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Archive Re: Hot Spots for Writers

    Hey everyone my friend and I who are both writers wanted to spend an evening out together attending a play,spoken word, or a book reading. We were having trouble finding ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Happy

    This defiantly put a smile on my face! This was such a cute poem! It is way different from most of the things I read and defiantly refreshing. I thought ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Twenty Years

    I really enjoyed this story. I just didn't want to stop reading it. I do however wish there was a reason given for her disappearance. Also I felt that there ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Christians' Lie

    All I can say simply is that, that was brilliant.

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)

    I was alone in one of the most amazing squares of my country. I was waiting for my mom because she was at work. I was eating a big and ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: {Don't Know What to do Anymore}

    First I want to say how sorry I am for the loss of your friend, I know this has the be the most tragic experience to be going through. I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: superstar

    Hi mistymoo! I thought this reminded me way to much of Lady Gaga or Jay Sean. But this could be what your going for, and if it is you can ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Wish

    For a minute I didn't know who you were talking about, I could be wrong but I think you should make it clear sooner who you were referring to. I ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Hide

    Hi Lacey! I have to say first that you sound like such a survivor! But I'm not sure if for you to tell what happened to you would be to ...

    Jun 5, 2010


The only person I know for certain I am better than is the person I used to be.
— CandyWizard