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Re: Leave out all the rest
I thought this was a very interesting story> I really enjoyed reading it. I liked how you didn't have your main character fall for the boy she thought was cute ...
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Re: The Artist and The Philosopher
This was an interesting story but there are a few things you should change like in the part when you said that he could still feel eyes on him should ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: My Story of the hard times with my mom
Hi,let me first say that I'm so sorry for what you and your family are going through. I just had two nitpicks though. One is I think you put my ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Redemption (Is in a Smile)
This was a really nice poem. I love the message of it, and the fact that you don't over use the title. It's simple but not overly simple and its ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Pygmalion
This was so amazing!!! It reminding me of the kind of books my teacher has us read in our classical literature class. I loved that it wasn't your average love ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Hot Spots for Writers
It's funny that you mention Shakespeare's Tavern because we were planning to go there, but then we found out they were playing Hamlet the musical and we didn't really want ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Hot Spots for Writers
Hey everyone my friend and I who are both writers wanted to spend an evening out together attending a play,spoken word, or a book reading. We were having trouble finding ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: The Happy
This defiantly put a smile on my face! This was such a cute poem! It is way different from most of the things I read and defiantly refreshing. I thought ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Twenty Years
I really enjoyed this story. I just didn't want to stop reading it. I do however wish there was a reason given for her disappearance. Also I felt that there ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
All I can say simply is that, that was brilliant.
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #1)
I was alone in one of the most amazing squares of my country. I was waiting for my mom because she was at work. I was eating a big and ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: {Don't Know What to do Anymore}
First I want to say how sorry I am for the loss of your friend, I know this has the be the most tragic experience to be going through. I ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: superstar
Hi mistymoo! I thought this reminded me way to much of Lady Gaga or Jay Sean. But this could be what your going for, and if it is you can ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Wish
For a minute I didn't know who you were talking about, I could be wrong but I think you should make it clear sooner who you were referring to. I ...
Jun 5, 2010 -
Re: Hide
Hi Lacey! I have to say first that you sound like such a survivor! But I'm not sure if for you to tell what happened to you would be to ...
Jun 5, 2010
